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Storm
by f.m.

i watch the raindrops slowly trickle down the glass
as my tears slide down my cheeks
i hear the thunder roaring in my ears
as my mind vaguely registers your voice
i see the light flashes across the dark sky
as my eyes see pictures of you leaving
i feel the coldness of the wind
as a sudden chill covers my heart
and as the storm slowly recedes
i watch you walk away
©2006-2009 ~linya
:iconlinya:

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A short verse on using a storm as a metaphor for a break-up.

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:iconmake-art-not-war:
"I love the rain; nobody can see my tears"

This is so sad.

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Beauty died with Juliet...

and we resurected it from its grave.
:iconlinya:
nothing like the weather to either cheer you up or make you cry :)

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Obviously I'm too scared to disclose who I really am...
:iconkevinhink:
Sad, but very nicely written. Beautiful work.

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I'm writing a personal check and in the memo line, I'm writing "unfair".

Hank Hill

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October 3, 2006
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